Lala blogger ++

Today, I`d like to do a review of a classmate's blog.
First of all, there can be no doubt that my friend fefa is an imaginative and top girl who likes making things in style. For axample, her blog`s layout adding beautiful gadgets, images and colorful writing. On the other hand, her way to express her ideas about something shows us that she is always making the difference.
It is my view that lala land has own style to present her posts...I mean, in her blog archive she writes in his way. Besides, she chose her options to design her blog like a template, display new settings and things like that. At this point, the blog she created is an original work. what else? I have no idea...
click here and look by yourself and make your own comments about her.
ah! the posts she has done are very interesting, although she has some grammar mistakes. But these are, maybe because she wrote it quickly.
Anyway, she is the best friend in the world and smiling person jaja...

blog link: http://laalaaalaaa.blogspot.com/
well, here`s how I pimp her post post doing an error correction :

Mister Carlos Maldonado:

I am writing this to you because I want to express my total dissapointment with justice in Chile. I am really upset with the way that you resolve problems, that is not the correct way.

(x)When someone commit a crime, he is send it to jail, but just for a few days and that is all. Then we can see that people(x) free and doing the same thing that he did before. Do you think that is ok? I do not think so.

I know that is pretty difficult to organize everything,(comma not needed) and I know that you have to do a lot of thing too, but don't you think that this is really important? It is shocking (wehen) SP we saw WW something like "A man kill her wife and his two kids" P then P send him to jail, they declare him like "mad" and it is free.

I think that you have to be careful with power, I mean, there are a lot of people with a lot of power, but they do not know how to use it. An example of this is judges, (bescause) SP I think that they are too light with (senteces) SP. So I do think that you have to do something about it.

Best regards

Fernanda Pérez

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